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Original Worlds (Ira Robinson)'s avatar

Nice work on this one! Definitely enjoyed.

Rose Rivers's avatar

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you.

Cory's avatar

That was a remarkable transition from character to character. Then with them all coming together at the end, it was a very beautiful choice!

I quite enjoyed this short story! Well done, Rose! 😊

Rose Rivers's avatar

Thank you, Cory. That means a lot. I was really focused on making the handoffs between characters feel earned, so I’m glad that came through. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Aliwritesherlife's avatar

This was such a good read! I really enjoyed this story.

Rose Rivers's avatar

Thank you, Ali! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate you.

Li Mitchell's avatar

I really appreciate the emotional layering in your stories, and particularly in this one. The concept of the emergency contact especially hits home for me, and the characters feel so relatable. I didn't know how it would turn out until I reached the end. Great job with that! And thank you for the happy ending--I love it!

Rose Rivers's avatar

Thank you so much! I’m really glad the emotional layers and the emergency contact concept resonated with you. I wanted to stay true to the fairy tales archetype, so I’m delighted the happy ending hit the right note.

Li Mitchell's avatar

Thank you for writing!